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It is time to go
It is time to die
Little black roses
Dieing one at a time.
One petal each day
the flower goes grey
as the pain inside
makes the colors bleed dry.
Crinkling, withering
fading, waiting
cracking, blackening
Dieing from trying.
Give up, fade away
leave me now for the pain
take away, fade away
leave me now, dust blown away.
©2007-2009 ~Ruthia
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meh....i'm in pain what can i say.
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Really cool! I like it, you set up a good mood with it!
I like this one. It's like the story of my life.... well... my love life.

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I named my unit 'Secret'... you know, "Strong enough for a man, but made for a woman."
~ Archangel-Zer0
This is certainly the best of your poems on here! I really like it!

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My :heart: is (c) to ~Genny-Raskin
So I write decenlty in pain? *grins* I'll keep that in mind!

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"Voices of the world call out to me, screams of agony and strife lull my dreams. I awake to a new day, the evil flowing through my veins like poisoned rain. The night calls me, beckoning forth. Come child of the night....come forth."
Pain may well be the strongest catalysts for a poet's skill.

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My :heart: is (c) to ~Genny-Raskin
sure it is... pity though...
What happened, why were you in pain?

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"First rock thrown again
Welcome hell you little saint
Mother Gaia in slaughter
Welcome to paradise soldier..." (Nightwish from ' Planet hell ' )
I have massively bad teeth (too much soda my mom would say) Combine that with my MS, which likes to make me feel like crap on occasionas and..yeah, not a lot of fun.

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"Voices of the world call out to me, screams of agony and strife lull my dreams. I awake to a new day, the evil flowing through my veins like poisoned rain. The night calls me, beckoning forth. Come child of the night....come forth."
oh, I hope you feel better now.

What MS is? (if it's not a secret)

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"First rock thrown again
Welcome hell you little saint
Mother Gaia in slaughter
Welcome to paradise soldier..." (Nightwish from ' Planet hell ' )

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